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Tuesday, April 21, 2020

Castle on the rock 2

Hi reader , You might be wondering when I am going to publish the  second part of the castle on the. Well today I am castle on the rock 2 has came out. This took kinda a long time but I think this is the best writing I have ever did. I hope you enjoy this story I enjoyed writing it. 😃 




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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 22, 2020 at 10:32 AM

    Hi Ashley,

    Your story is very interesting. At the end i actually made an Oh No face! I haven't done my second story but i'm really looking forward to your next book.

    Tiffany

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  2. TrishApril 23, 2020 at 11:09 AM

    Hi Ashley
    What an action packed story.I really liked how you used adjectives to enhance your descriptive writing.Keep up using lots of adjectives.Im really curious as to what will unfold in the next chapter.Well done Ashley
    Trish Wakefield

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  3. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 1:42 PM

    Hi Ashley, that is a wonderful descriptive story and I like the way you have used paragraphs. I can't wait to the next chapter with the evil step sister. Will the fairies be in it too?
    Mr Matai

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