I readers, you might be thinking when is this story going to END! Well that specaial day is today I have final finished CASTLE ON THE ROCK. I was a long battle but it did come to an end. This was the best one I have ever writed. Keep safe and hope you enjoy. 🐈
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, April 29, 2020
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Hi Ashley, you did so well to finish your descriptive writing. I really liked you story and I love a happy ending. Te mahi pai. It is almost ready to be published. Check you are telling the story in the correct tense.
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