Today I did a descriptive writing. It called The Castle on the Rock. Hope you like it see you until the next book😸
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Hi Ashley,
ReplyDeleteWow, you have been working hard on your creative writing. You have used some excellent words like rocky, foggy and misty, to describe the setting. I wonder if maybe you could describe how the evil step sister stole baby Anastasia. I'm looking forward to reading the next part of the story.
Thanks for sharing.
Miss Satherley